What are your thoughts after reading this?
Aura rose A red rose resting on a grand piano, enjoying its delicate beauty of its own. The room has no walls, their limits are endless. A rich black is present in the atmosphere. Although the room is no limit, the rose has an aura divine, which flourishes in the eyes of many. It means a great many things … A petal fallen from loneliness … A shed petals of hope … A petal given for the romance … A petal maintained by the loneliness … But somewhere, amid all its meanings, establishes a lower celestial elegance. *** ** ** * * ** * * I am not asking for a review, but I am open to that if they want to. I know your thoughts after reading this. What makes you think? Is evoke emotions in particular? Designed thoughts are appreciated. Thanks! Why Do You intrepret is forced? I am asking this in a sincere manner. I would appreciate your reasoning. FIGJAM good response.
My first thought is, if the room has no limits and no limits, what is the grand piano resting on? Or is it floating? Why the rose to be a piano? Why can not simply be? You have these objects in a room but the room has no limits – which means not in a room in a room all bc implies limits. Would "feel" better for me if the rose was the only that the "rich black midnight." perhaps the fallen petals are floating in the same area as the rose.
