Poppies Wheat
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Poppies and Wheat 18 Machine Embroidery Designs Set $24.00 |
is a good translation, please?
this is my poetry, which is dedicated to my best friend who died three months ago. I'm Italian and I do not know if my grammar! Is right … I called this poem 2SD June because "this is the date of his birth, June 2SD: endless fields of opium perfume cherry blossom trees from the ears of wheat soaked in the storms of summer sun that gives me the rainbow balm-crickets sing again their voices to the chorus that night cover Diamonds, stars. Every flower and nothing dies, no memory.
June 2: the endless fields of poppies (poppy feilds ENDLESS ENDLESS OR POPPY feilds) scented cherry blossoms in the ears of wheat soaked in the storms of summer sun that gives me the rainbow balm-crickets sing again their voices to the chorus nights are filled with diamonds, the stars. (YOU CAN NOT LET THE STARS, THAT IS MEANT TO THE WORD OF DIAMONDS) All flowers die and nothing, not memory (imitate his memory) This suggests that nature imitates his friend s of memory instead of memory imitating nature friends. Maybe a little more poetic? These are just suggestions! I love poetry. Very good poem! Sorry for your loss.
